Day three of rewrites for Flash Zombies. All I can say is "ugh". The same three chapters (the first three). I certainly hope when Chris and I go over these this time we won't change five sentences or rewrite a whole paragraph or realise we've slipped from third person narrative to first person narrative. "Sigh"..... If I didn't already have a sizeable goose egg on my forehead I would be banging my head against the wall. It certainly is amazing that we can rework one sentence fifteen different ways before we think it sounds authentic. oh! Did I mention commas? The bane of my existance. To use a comma or not to use a comma THAT is the question! Please God let someone read these books and be entertained! Hehe I jest. I really love writing. This nit picky stuff though is torture.......Well back to the torture chamber!....Blog later....Joan
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